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Carmilla - Act I Scenes 1 and 2

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Adaptation of Carmilla by Sarah Wolfe

Original novella by Joseph Sheridan Le Fanu

Characters:
Carmilla:
Laura:
Laura’s father (give actual name later):
General Spielsdorf:
Madame Perrodon:
Mademoiselle De LaFontaine:
Nursery maid(Ella):
Housekeeper(Freda):
Carmilla’s “mother”:



Act I
Scene I
Opens with young Laura in her room. It is night time and the moon shines ominously through her translucent and drawn back curtains. Laura wakes up and looks around, failing to notice Carmilla standing in the shadows.

Laura: (Yawns). Miss, are you here? That’s weird. I wonder what time it is, if she’s already gone to bed. (Notices Carmilla standing at the side of the bed.) Huh? Who are...

Carmilla: Shh...

Laura: (Obviously captivated by Carmilla, she quiets.)

Carmilla: (Lays down beside Laura, and soothes her to sleep.)

(Nursery maid enters alarmed and Carmilla attacks her. Laura wakes up at the sound and begins screaming, so Carmilla bites her and then flees through the window)


Scene II
The next morning, Laura’s father calls from the hallway looking for the maid. He opens the door, the body laying in front of it, and is taken aback. He rushes to Laura, who has blankets covering her head. He wakes her urgently.

Father: Laura! Has any harm come to you? You seem fine. Oh, thank god you’re safe! But how could you have slept through all that? I didn’t hear a single yelp last night, and I thought you would have woken up in the middle of the night, from some nightmare or another, as you always do. Somehow, you must have slept through it all. (He embraces her, happy to see that she’s all right, not even giving her a chance to answer. He leaves her to go examine the body. Housekeepers enter.)


Father: She’s dead and how ungodly pale! Our once rosy-cheeked Ella. I should scarcely recognize her like this, and her face is frozen in such alarm! Did she have a sickness that any of you recall? Anemia, perhaps?

Housekeeper: Not that I know of...No, she couldn’t have. She was always so vivacious and able-bodied. She always pranced through the halls after a long day of work. There was not an ounce of illness in her. She never fatigued and bounced back like a young green twig. Even when we all caught maladies, she was the sole person spared. It would be unlike her to fall ill, and never this horribly.

Father: I can’t understand why...and the window was left open. Ella always made sure to shut it. After all, Laura has a terrible habit of opening the windows at night. No understanding at all of what insects and cold air can do to health. I can’t fathom why she’d do it, if she always demands several blankets, even during the summer months.

Housekeeper #2: It’s probably nothing more than a child’s negligence. I shouldn’t expect any ten year old to have such forethought, no matter how intelligent, and your daughter is no exception.

Laura: My neck really hurts.

Father: Perhaps you’ve slept on it crooked, but come here I will look. What odd incisions, I’ve never seen anything like it. They don’t seem deep. Perhaps it was from the day before. You always give meaning to the term “choker,” you ought to tie your necklaces longer. As your mother always said, “one can outgrow necklaces as they do shoes.” Don’t worry, dear Laura, like cat scratches they will heal in a matter of days.

Laura: I saw a pretty, though odd, woman in here last night.

Father: What?

Laura: I saw a pretty girl with long, dark, shiny hair and beautiful dark eyes. She had the sweetest voice, and blended into the darkness, like a cat. One could only see her eyes shine like silver, reflecting the light of the moon. Oh, I thought she was all good, too good, but then she attacked Ella. It was horrible, but she was too beautiful to be upset with. Much too beautiful to let myself hate.

Father: Laura, I think it was merely another nightmare. Your window is fifty feet from the ground, and if some criminal or another were to want in, he would have likely come through the downstairs. And, why on earth would he attack only Ella, the sweetest of all Styria? There’s some piece of evidence that we must be missing. I shall go fetch the doctor before nightfall, for she looks unnaturally pale, even for the pallor of death.
So, I'm adapting Carmilla as a present for one of my friends, and also just as my first serious writing project. It will be an ongoing WIP for a long time. I'm trying to keep it as true as I can to the original novella. I will link between pages in the future.

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